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Wednesday, August 7, 2013

My Persuasive Writing

<Kwon GI Young>
Korea, KMLA
8/8 2013

Dear all PAs and TAs in GLPS

 I'm writing this letter because I believe that we should use Korean in the cafeteria, and stop getting EOP in cafeteria.
 Many experts like Dr. Kim Yung Jin, for example agree with me and my claim. THen, I'll explain reasons for this and give facts to support my opinion.
  
  The first reason is because we, GLPS students have to pay attention to EOP even we are having a meal. Although EOP is obviously a rule, but because of that, we have to use unfamiliar language anywhere, and anytime. We use English in class, in hallway, in dormitory, and even in the cafeteria. We are thinking and keeping this because it's our promise, however, I request you(PAs) to change that rule littel bit. 
  The second reason is because by using a few Korean in cafeteria, we can improve our friendship. There are my friends' opinion to show this is true. Actually, shat I'm saying is related to our language skill. In Korean, we can share our opinion freely because it's 'convenient'. But, in English, it's too hard to express our mind(especially like us who has no experience in other countries.). In fact, GLPS divided classes from class 1 to class 20, right? Surely, high lever classes' students like 8~10 or 18~20 is convenient to speak English because almost they went abroad before. But, lower level classes' students are not convenient, so almost EOP papers are in that classes. I don't mean it's unfair, but, please consider like us who are not good at speaking English.
  The third and final reason is because extreme stress can cause disease(Surely, I'm saying this because I'm suffered from EOP). According to Dr. Kim Yung Jin, stress can cause diseases like headache, stomachache, and vomiting, which are symptoms of stress. Also, he said that if the stress stays for a long time,it can cause lack of studying, and depression. You don't want us to be lazy for studying because of lack of studying, right? So, it will be better to let us use Korean in the cafeteria to reduce our stress.
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   As you can see three reasons, you have to allow us to use Korean in the cafeteria(except abusive language) freely. Based on my argument and reasons, 'stress', 'friendship', and my opinion, I hope you PAs will consider my point of view carefully and change the rule about EOP as soon as possible. I really beg to you. If you have reasons that you cannot consider my opinion, please e-mail me.(giyoung123@naver.com)
  
                                                                                                                  Sincerely, 
                                                                                                                  Kwon Gi Young
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  1. Sung Hyun ParkAugust 11, 2013 at 6:09 PM

    Your first argument is pretty much blank, and your third argument is simply too exaggerated to be persuasive. The EOP is something that you knew you were getting into and it has the express purpose of improving your English.

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